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You close your eyes, I open mine, A hand upon our chests, We breathe and wonder, "What will I be when I'm no longer me?" For the dawn is thunder, Brief as can be, But the night is slumber— The truth we see, As our hearts go under.

Darling Mionette's A Writer's Guide To The Second Draft Oh noes. Let those be my first words in this tutorial. Now that I've gotten that out of my system, may I never mutilate the English language in that manner again. Welcome to my tutorial on the dreaded "Second Draft" of creative writing. If you've read my other tutorial (How to write - and love it), then you're well aware of why I call this the dreaded second draft, but if you haven't, then let me explain: I am a firm believer that all editing in creative writing should be left to the second draft. The first draft, should remain edit-free so as not to stem creativity. Going into this tut